Love Poem: The Silent Treatment

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By stricktlydating

This is a poem about when you're dating someone - you think everything's going along fine, and you've developed feelings for this person... And all of a sudden they go missing - giving you the 'silent treatment'...  Unfortunately it's not an uncommon dating situation to be in, but it's one of the most frustrating!

Left with no reply from you

My friend, the lover

I once knew

No response, no phone call

You make my world

You've made me small

Time and distance fills your space

You've disappeared

Without a trace

Even the truth would serve me better

With a note, a line

One letter

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Comments:

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gary_lloyd 2 years ago

Ouch!11 That's touching.. Wishes you get him soon...

God bless you

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stricktlydating Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanyou garry_lloyd, best wishes to you.

saurabhpande 2 years ago

Oh man i'm fan of yours. real good.

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stricktlydating Hub Author 2 years ago

Thankyou so much saurabhpande, best wishes to you!

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Sherbet Penny 2 years ago

Again great emotional writing, there is a silent tone of anger soaked in this piece, excellent again.

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celinewayne 23 months ago

so touchy,

i've experienced this few months ago (T_T)

thz for sharing ...

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celinewayne 23 months ago

been in such a situation ...

thanks for sharing this touchy poem

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stricktlydating Hub Author 23 months ago

Thankyou for your comments celinewayne, best wishes!

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