Poem: He Can't Promise A Relationship

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By stricktlydating

When dating, sometimes it feels like the guy says the wrong things at the wrong times. And it can really throw you off your guard, even floor you! This is a poem about one such time...

He says he'll see me again

Thought he "Can't promise a relationship"

This is after a cosy meal

And love-making.

With his bad timing

I just say "Okay"

But I wonder what he means

Aren't we already in a relationship?

I dare not ask him now

Maybe he's feeling worried

Who knows why he threw that in

I say goodnight - and roll over.

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Comments:

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Anath 2 years ago

It never works -longterm- to ask someone to commit. You are either ready or not. Most of the time the more you press someone to commit, the more he feels haunted and will escape. I found that not commmiting to a relationship is the best way to have him at your feet wanting to commit... crazy!

Nice poem :)

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stricktlydating Hub Author 2 years ago

G'day Anath, I appreciate your thoughts on this poem! I agree with you too...Only problem is when you want the one you can't have soooo badly!!! Best wishes.

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creativeone59 Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Thanks for nice hub, thanks for sharing. creativeone59

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stricktlydating Hub Author 2 years ago

Thankyou creativeone59, it's always nice to hear from you!

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Dark Heart 21 months ago

Short and sweet.I like it.

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Youngcurves19 20 months ago

Dark heart thats what i was gonna say! nice poem!

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stricktlydating Hub Author 20 months ago

Thanks for your comments Youngcurves19 and Dark Heart

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